Template:Did you know nominations/Cora Slocomb di Brazza
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Cora Slocomb di Brazza
- ... that Cora Slocomb di Brazza created lace cooperative schools to teach Friulian women a way to earn a living? Source: [1] see abstract. Full ref available from the WP library
ALT1: ... that Cora Slocomb di Brazza, who created lace-making schools, fought against US tariffs and the death penalty, designed a peace flag for women's rights groups, spent thirty-seven years in confinement?Source: same as above- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Shirley Kurata
Improved to Good Article status by SusunW (talk), GRuban (talk), and Ipigott (talk). Nominated by SusunW (talk) at 15:21, 7 March 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Cora Slocomb di Brazza; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
- ALT1 does not appear to have the right conjunction before the sentence about confinement. It also jams too many things into the hook and I count 201 characters. The article was promoted to good article status and nominated in time to qualify. The image is free and clear enough. The article has the correct inline citations and is neutral. ALT0 is somewhat interesting and it is cited and in the article. The copyright detector does not detect violations and my spot checks did not reveal any violations. The QPQ is completed. This is a very interesting person, good work. Bruxton (talk) 23:09, 7 March 2023 (UTC)