Comment: QPQ later, newly expanded, CE is appreciated.
5x expanded by Nyanardsan (talk). Self-nominated at 00:09, 31 January 2023 (UTC). Note: As of October 2022, all changes made to promoted hooks will be logged by a bot. The log for this nomination can be found at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Malinau Kota, so please watch a successfully closed nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.
I suggest that this hook could be revised to say ALT1 ... that Malinau Kota, with only 31% of Malinau Regency's population, is home to more than 70% of its registered restaurants? --Metropolitan90(talk) 07:11, 31 January 2023 (UTC)
ALT2 ... that Malinau Kota, with 31% of Malinau Regency's total population, is home to more than 70% of its registered restaurants? Nyanardsan (talk) 08:43, 31 January 2023 (UTC)
Comment Needs to be located in Indonesia, unless "where the **** is Malinau Regency?" is supposed to add to hookiness. Johnbod (talk) 05:29, 1 February 2023 (UTC)
I mean, I guess so, but I don't think knowing the country is really necessary in order to understand the hook. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 07:25, 2 February 2023 (UTC)
Other problems: N - Would like Johnbod's suggestion to be used.
QPQ: Done.
Overall: @Nyanardsan: Good article. Did some copyediting for you. Though, I would like for you to use Johnbod's suggestion to make the hook work better. Onegreatjoke (talk) 18:22, 24 February 2023 (UTC)
- Would like Johnbod's suggestion to be used.
@Nyanardsan: Good article. Did some copyediting for you. Though, I would like for you to use Johnbod's suggestion to make the hook work better. Onegreatjoke (talk) 18:22, 24 February 2023 (UTC)
Better. Onegreatjoke (talk) 20:10, 3 March 2023 (UTC)